Sunday 27 January 2019

SHOULD THE PERSONAL USE OF DRONES
BE BANNED?
Today, drones are used fo a lot of things. Some people think that they are very
dangerous so they should be banned for the personal use. Is it a good idea to
ban drones?


On the one hand, drones are a good option to take pictures from the sky.
Besides they can give you a package that you have ordered online or
people that organise a concert can use them to watch for dangers. For
example, one boy has disappeared ant the police can use it to look for
the boy.


On the other hand, drones can be harmful. The other day, we met a girl
who was taking pictures with a drone an she cut her leg so we think that
if you want to use a drone, you must have a license to avoid dangers. All
the people have to know how to use drones.

In conclusion, we think that it shouldn't be banned, but it’s important that
anyone who has a droneknows how to use it and has a permission to use it.

Wednesday 2 January 2019

E-mail with no mistakes

Xavi, I write the first informal e-mail that we did, not the exam one, beacause I don't have it.

AN INFORMAL E-MAIL

Hi Wayne!

I'm writing to tell you about myself.
I'm from Santa Margarida de Montbui a little town of Spain. I've got one little brother. His name is Alex. My mother, called Yolanda, works at the sports centre of my town as a recepcionist. However, my father, called Javi, works as a mechanic.
I live in a house, my grandparents live on the first floor and on the second floor my family and I.
I used to play handball at the past, but nowadays I don't.
I'm doing "first batxillerat", it's very difficult but I think that I can do it very well.
Why an exchange in New York? Because I love learning different languages and also I want to improve my English. I like making new friends too. And I would like to see different cultures.

That's all for now.

All the best,
Lorena.

Writing and speaking

THINGS TO IMPROVE




NAME
TERM
WRITING
SPEAKING
Egea, Lorena
1st
- I often go walking. →  I often go walking there (at the school).
- called Alex, in fact →  called Alex. In fact.
- I love listening to music, I like all the types of music. →
I love listening to music. I like all types of music.
- I love meetting with → I love meeting with (one t).
- I go to first of batxillerat. → I go to first batxillerat.
- I’m going to explain you → I’m going to explain to you.
- my daily life, I wake up → my daily life. I wake up.
- and I finish it at → and I finish them at.
- I go to english classes → I go to English lessons/ I go to a private school.
- At half past five, I retourn → At half past five I return.
- I take a shower → I have a shower.
- Finnally → Finally.
SHORTER SENTENCES

2nd


3rd